This is actually ZonZon's design for the center of the Massive: a gigantic array of hallways that interconnect in this one room. Elevators at the corners connect the floors and allow for one to get to any base hallway. If you follow any hall in the Massive, eventually you will end up here.
There's a hidden ZonZon flea in the picture. First one to find it gets 20 points for no legitimate reason whatsoever. FD
And when you do find it, you will probably be furious at yourself for not finding it earlier. XD
As I look at this scenery, I am very impressed with the amount of depth, and it's perspective. Thicker lines to show that something is close up, to the nice amount of detail in this picture. I love how there shows both the different insignia's on the walls, and the extra lines added onto the walls.
As nice as the perspective is, there is a few issues with it. I'm not sure if you were trying to make this place a perfect box shape or not. But those rooms becoming smaller and smaller makes it appear that the place is jutting out forward in a bit of a irregular shape. Like the rooms are tilting forward. The foreground is also a bit crooked and looks like its slanted, along with the ones running along the other walls in the background. Since it's at this angle the rooms and the elevator would all be the same size going down, unless it was in more of a birds eye view. The shading is also rather too light, some walls should be darker than others. Placing a variety of contrast will add a bit more to the picture and place more depth into the picture.
As nice as the perspective is, there is a few issues with it. I'm not sure if you were trying to make this place a perfect box shape or not. But those rooms becoming smaller and smaller makes it appear that the place is jutting out forward in a bit of a irregular shape. Like the rooms are tilting forward. The foreground is also a bit crooked and looks like its slanted, along with the ones running along the other walls in the background. Since it's at this angle the rooms and the elevator would all be the same size going down, unless it was in more of a birds eye view. The shading is also rather too light, some walls should be darker than others. Placing a variety of contrast will add a bit more to the picture and place more depth into the picture.
Otherwise great job!
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